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Sliggoo Hugs a Bunny

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Well I did one picture featuring Fluttershy with a Goomy, and a Goodra. So now here's a piece where she's with a Sliggoo. Sad thing is the poor Pokemon is blind during this stage of evolution. So it for some reason mistakes Angel Bunny for Fluttershy, much to Angel's annoyance.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Hi there, this is my first critique, and I'm german, so please excuse me if my grammar sucks.

Ok, first of all the Vision: As a brony, I really like the fact that it's pony themed, but even by objective points, it's quite good. The facial expressions are well done, you really can see the "disgust" in our favourite semi-villains face, the joy of the "Sliggoo" as you call it, and the look on Fluttershys face fits perfectly in. even good work with shadows. Maybe make Fluttershy's mane a little longer (you know, "hair extensions" <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/> )

About the Originality: I had no idea what a "Sliggoo" was up until a little google-research, so you are combining Pokemon and MlP:FiM. As it is Fluttershy, who is very good with animals, it is a awesome conclusion to mix them both.

I'm not sure what kind of Technique you have used, but the contrast and the well defined lines are well done.

The Impact: whew, that's hard to say, i would say it' above average, since it's pony-related, which always has an impact on many people, obviously on me, too. Also, as it is a high contrast image, it catches the eye easily.

Overall i would say good job, well done, there are only few "improvements" you could make, for example her cutie mark, make it a little more 3D, just look at how her main body is directed (to a far away, down left corner) but her cutiemark seems a bit shifted. But i have watched too many episodes of "everything wrong with [movie-name]" so im just nitpicking.

I like your art, keep up the good work!